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The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table illustrates the proportion of monthly household income five European countries spend on food and drink, housing, clothing and entertainme Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table depicts the share of income families spend their
money
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 in five countries in Europe.
Overall
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, the biggest percentage of
money
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 goes towards food and drink and housing in all countries
while
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 clothing is bought the least. People living in France, Germany, and the UK put most of their financial resources into housing
whereas
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 those from Turkey and Spain spend the largest share of income on food and drinks.
According to
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 the data, France, Germany, and the UK spend the biggest amount of
money
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 on housing with 31, 33 and 37%, respectively. They have a common trend of spending less
money
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 on clothing out of all categories with citizens of France achieving only a mere 7%. Returning to the remaining countries, both Turkey and Spain used a bit more than a third of their monthly salary on food and drinks;
therefore
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, promoting
this
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 category as their biggest expenditure.
Although
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 the resources spent on housing were similar at around 20% of the income, people in Spain used 5% more for entertainment.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words money with synonyms.
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