Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the would are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

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30 years, many towns in the world have been suffering from traffic jam issues caused by increasing the total number of drivers who drive their own

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. I believe it is a true problem that we are facing nowadays and the government should improve public

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in order to gain more people travelling by non-private

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. The improvement of the quality of

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followed by decreasing prices has been successful in attracting a lot of individuals from various regions and it causes almost every family to have at least one car. In Jakarta,

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, the vast majority of citizens commute using a car or motorcycle and

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condition accounts for roads are fulfilled by these, particularly in the rush time

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as mornings and late evenings. The biggest reason why they use private

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is because of cheaper if we compare them with other types provided by the local council.

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, using private

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is more

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convenient

. It is happening because several public

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have poor management and uncompleted facilities. To tackle

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, the government should focus on developing public areas especially regarding

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transportation

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. It must be

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accessible

, cheap and

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provide

proper utilities in order to gain inhabitants commuting by non-private

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. In terms of easy

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access, the authorities have to build stations in busy areas

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as offices and market centres.

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that, not only focus on raising the quantity, but the government must

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lower the price of public

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, so

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it can compete with their own

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.

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, local councils should provide better facilities and equipment to boost people's attention. In conclusion, I fully believe that the traffic jam has become a huge problem nowadays.

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situation is happening

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of the lowering prices of

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by companies so people can afford to buy easily. The best measurement to discourage citizens from using private

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is by providing

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high-quality

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public

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