Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the would are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Over the

last

30 years, many towns in the world have been suffering from traffic jam issues caused by increasing the total number of drivers who drive their own

cars

. I believe it is a true problem that we are facing nowadays and the government should improve public

transportation

in order to gain more people travelling by non-private

vehicles

. The improvement of the quality of

cars

followed by decreasing prices has been successful in attracting a lot of individuals from various regions and it causes almost every family to have at least one car. In Jakarta,

for example

, the vast majority of citizens commute using a car or motorcycle and

this

condition accounts for roads are fulfilled by these, particularly in the rush time

such

as mornings and late evenings. The biggest reason why they use private

cars

is because of cheaper if we compare them with other types provided by the local council.

In addition

, using private

vehicles

therefore

is more

convinient

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convenient

. It is happening because several public

transportation

have poor management and uncompleted facilities. To tackle

this

, the government should focus on developing public areas especially regarding

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transportation

. It must be

accessiablr

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accessible

, cheap and

provid

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provide

proper utilities in order to gain inhabitants commuting by non-private

cars

. In terms of easy

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access, the authorities have to build stations in busy areas

such

as offices and market centres.

Besides

that, not only focus on raising the quantity, but the government must

therefore

lower the price of public

transportation

, so

thus

it can compete with their own

vehicles

.

Moreover

, local councils should provide better facilities and equipment to boost people's attention. In conclusion, I fully believe that the traffic jam has become a huge problem nowadays.

This

situation is happening

as a result

of the lowering prices of

cars

by companies so people can afford to buy easily. The best measurement to discourage citizens from using private

vehicles

is by providing

a

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high-quality

of

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public

transportation

.