The table shows data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The table illustrates data about what people in the UK thought the government should increase spending on.
Overall
, it can be pointed out from the table that, the women were the highest for health while
the men were the biggest for education and the other areas for gender. Also
, the age
group 35-44 years were above all
of them in the UK.
It is clear from the age
group table that, the health increase is 18- 65 years of age
, so it starts at 25% and jumps up by 72%. However
, the 35-44 and 45-54 age
groups stay stable for their health. Moreover
, education has decreased from 52% to 26% for the 35-44 years age
group thus
, it drops of
12% for those above 65 Change preposition
to
age
.
In addition
, education is 55% for males but it is 40% for females. Other areas are almost the same for gender like the boy is 13% and the girl is 12%.Submitted by i.nureddinn on
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