Writing task 1. The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The given diagram illustrates the procedure of creating

sugar

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from

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canes

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cane

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.

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, it is evident that

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process contains

of

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7 various operations . It starts with growing the

sugar

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canes

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cane

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and ends with drying and cooling the

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. Regarding the first operation , which is growing

sugar

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canes

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, it usually takes from 12 to 18 months for a

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cane to be mature enough to harvest . After that , the harvesting begins and is divided into 2 stages . Either it is done manually by humans or by a heavy machine which is more convenient . From here , the manufacturing begins by crushing the

sugar

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canes

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in another machine which produces juice .

Then

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juice is collected in large bowls and is purified using

limestone

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filter. The final product of

previous

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stage is

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poured into

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evaporator which

turn

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juice into syrup by heating the mixture . Regarding the remaining processes ,

sugar

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crystals are separated from syrup in a centrifuge before

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this

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fructose crystals are dried and cooled in a certain device .