Some people think that poverty is the reason behind most crimes. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

poverty

is becoming a major problem in our

comunities

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communities

.Few

people

beleive

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believe

that most of the crime in our society is done by

poverty

.I agree with

this

notion

beacuse

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because

,

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of,lack

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lack

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the lack

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of

physiologicals neeeds

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physiological needs

and

role

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the role

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of social

meida

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media

.

TO commence

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with the statement that

poverty

is the main cause of crimes.

this

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is because,many

people

living

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live

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in a poor condition

due to

which, they are unable to achieve their physiological needs.In many countries individuals earn

on

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daily wages,it becomes difficult for them to

fullfill

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fulfil

their basic needs.

For example

, a survey conducted on

poverty

has shown that

,

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80% of

people

in

pakistan

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Pakistan

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earn

on

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apply

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daily wages.

most

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of them drive rikshaws.

On the other hand

, another reason may be, the role of media. when

people

are not able to attain their needs,they often try to gain it forcefully.They indulge themselves in criminal activities like snatching

properties ,to

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property or

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kill

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killing

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someone for food

while

social media is the other factor that

show

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increasing

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an increasing

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rate of crime

beacuse

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because

of

poverty

.for intance

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For instance

,criminal activities

shown

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are shown

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in the drama industry.

people

learn how to offence from dramas.

therefore

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,

provety

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poverty

may be one of

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the reason

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reason

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reasons

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of

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for

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crime

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the crime

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.

To conclude

,

i

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stronlgy

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strongly

agree with the

statment

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statement

that

poverty

is the basic cause of offences

beacuse

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because

of

lack

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a lack

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of physiological needs and the role , social media

play

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plays

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to enhance

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in enhancing

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the

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apply

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poverty

.