The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of a drug company’s total sales, by region, from 2002 to 2006.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the distribution of a drug company's total
sales
across three regions—
America
,
Europe
, and
Asia
—over a five-year period from 2002 to 2006. The percentages of
sales
in each region are provided for each year. In 2002,
America
accounted for the highest proportion of
sales
at 41%,
while
Europe
and
Asia
contributed 34% and 25%, respectively. Over the years, the percentage of
sales
in
America
gradually decreased to 30% by 2006.
Conversely
,
Europe
maintained a relatively stable
share
, fluctuating slightly between 35% and 38%.
Asia
,
however
, experienced a steady increase in its
share
of
sales
, rising from 25% in 2002 to 40% in 2006.
This
increase made
Asia
the region with the highest
sales
percentage by the end of the period, surpassing both
America
and
Europe
. Notably,
while
America
’s
share
showed a consistent decline,
Europe
’s
share
did not experience significant changes.
Overall
, the data indicates a shift in the drug company’s
sales
distribution, with
Asia
becoming the most significant market by 2006,
while
America
's contribution steadily decreased.
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