The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The Maps below show a beachfront area in Australia between 1950 and today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The maps illustrate the developments which took place in a
coast
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area
of Australia over a 74-year period between 1950 and the present.
Overall
, it can be seen that the comparison of 2 maps reveals significant changes over the period. Obviously, the contraction of roads to connect between south and north areas is the most substantial development In the northern part of the
area
, there are small developments across 74 years. The playground located on the west of the dining tables is repurposed to the car parking.
Further
development is that the parking lot east of the pavilion is enlarged.
However
, dining tables and pavilion between the two car parks remain. Regarding
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the south of a beachfront
area
in Australia, it is noticeable that there are dramatic changes.
While
the swimming pool on the west of the beach is extended, the scale of the pool
in
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the east has
no
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not
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change
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.
Moreover
, both clubs of
surf
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are built beside both swimming
the
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pools.
Furthermore
, the restaurant is erected beside the surf club in the southwest
area
. Despite
this
, the lighthouse still takes place on the west side under the pool.
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