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The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided line graph demonstrates the average monthly
change
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 in the prices of three metals, including
Zinc
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,
Copper
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 and Nickel throughout the whole year of 2014.
Overall
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, it is evident that Nickle accounted for the biggest
change
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 in price in 2014.
Also
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, the least fluctuation in prices belonged to
copper
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. In January, Nickle had a significant
change
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 at about 6% compared with the previous month and
Zinc
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 accounted for the least
change
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 nearly 1%. Within the next two months, both Nickel and
copper
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 keep decreasing by nearly 5% and 1.5%, respectively. It is noticeable that during winter all three metals remained unchanged. As can be observed, in March, the figure for
zinc
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 was 1%,
whereas
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 that for Nickel was lower approximately 0.5%. from
this
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 month until January, these figures experienced a dramatic fall at roughly 2% and 3.5%, respectively.
At the end
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 of the year,
zinc
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 and
copper
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 reached nearly the first percentages.

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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words change, zinc, copper with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "change" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "nearly" was used 3 times.
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