The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The provided line graph demonstrates the average monthly
change
in the prices of three metals, including
Zinc
,
Copper
and Nickel throughout the whole year of 2014.
Overall
, it is evident that Nickle accounted for the biggest
change
in price in 2014.
Also
, the least fluctuation in prices belonged to
copper
. In January, Nickle had a significant
change
at about 6% compared with the previous month and
Zinc
accounted for the least
change
nearly 1%. Within the next two months, both Nickel and
copper
keep decreasing by nearly 5% and 1.5%, respectively. It is noticeable that during winter all three metals remained unchanged. As can be observed, in March, the figure for
zinc
was 1%,
whereas
that for Nickel was lower approximately 0.5%. from
this
month until January, these figures experienced a dramatic fall at roughly 2% and 3.5%, respectively.
At the end
of the year,
zinc
and
copper
reached nearly the first percentages.
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