The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The following graph illustrates the changes in the amount and variety of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.
It is clear from the graph that, from the
year
1975, all the varities
of fast foods showed an incline Correct your spelling
varieties
while
fish
and chips
started to decrease in popularity. While
the graph for Pizza
and Hamburgers
kept on increasing, fish
and chips
showed a significant change in consumption in the year
1980 before declining again from 95 times eaten per year
in 1985. Furthermore
, both pizza
and hamburgers
showed a constant number of meals eaten per year
from 1995 to 2000. Pizza
, which started from 5 meals eaten per year
quickly rose in popularity and ended at 85 eaten per year
whereas
, hamburgers
, which also
a
quick rise ended at 100 eaten per Add a missing verb
had a
year
while
only starting at 10 eaten per year
. In contrast
to pizzas and hamburgers
, Fish
and chips
showed a decline from 100 meals eaten per year
to 40 eaten per year
by an Australian teenager.
To conclude
, The most popular fast food dish for Australian teenagers in year
2000 was Change the article
the year
hamburgers
, followed by pizza
and lastly
by fish
and chips
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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, fish, chips, pizza, hamburgers with synonyms.
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