The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The following graph illustrates the changes in the amount and variety of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. It is clear from the graph that, from the

year

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1975, all the

varities

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varieties

of fast foods showed an incline

while

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fish

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and

chips

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started to decrease in popularity.

While

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the graph for

Pizza

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and

Hamburgers

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kept on increasing,

fish

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and

chips

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showed a significant change in consumption in the

year

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1980 before declining again from 95 times eaten per

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in 1985.

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, both

pizza

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and

hamburgers

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showed a constant number of meals eaten per

year

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from 1995 to 2000.

Pizza

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, which started from 5 meals eaten per

year

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quickly rose in popularity and ended at 85 eaten per

year

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whereas

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hamburgers

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, which

also

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had a

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quick rise ended at 100 eaten per

year

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while

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only starting at 10 eaten per

year

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In contrast

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to pizzas and

hamburgers

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Fish

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and

chips

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showed a decline from 100 meals eaten per

year

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to 40 eaten per

year

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by an Australian teenager.

To conclude

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, The most popular fast food dish for Australian teenagers in

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year

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the year

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2000 was

hamburgers

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, followed by

pizza

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and

lastly

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fish

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and

chips

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, fish, chips, pizza, hamburgers with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 3 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "showed" was used 4 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
5
Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

196 words

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The graph below shows information about the kinds of food that teenagers in Australia enjoyed eating. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The main aim of science should be to improve the people's lives . To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

Do you think consumers should be responsible for their poor nutritional choices, or do food manufacturers need to be more honest about the potential dangers in eating certain foods which are high in salt, sugar and fat?