You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words. The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Write at least 150 words.

The chart gives information on the percentage of women going into higher education in five countries for the years 1980 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of females
attended
Correct pronoun usage
who attended
show examples
into higher level of education in five nations between 1980 and 2015.
Overall
, it can be seen that the total number of woman students has increased considerably in almost countries shown. On the one hand, in 1980, the UK, the USA and South Korea had slightly over 30%, just under 40% and around a quarter respectively.
Then
, those conditions grew significantly to below 60% in the UK and USA.
Whereas
, South Korea has risen by almost twofold in a 35-year period.
By contrast
, a small
raise
Correct your spelling
rise
show examples
happened in France, where in 1980, the percentage of women was about 50% and it changed to just upper 50%.
While
,
Remove the comma
apply
show examples
there was no
differentiate
Replace the word
difference
show examples
observed in Australia. During 35 years, the high
educate
Replace the word
education
show examples
of women was constant
in
Change preposition
at
show examples
roughly 60%.
Submitted by hikmanurdin04 on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • higher education
  • increase
  • decrease
  • trend
  • significant
  • comparison
  • identify
  • highest
  • lowest
  • contextual
  • global
  • relevant
  • constant
  • substantial
  • fluctuation
  • proportional
  • data
  • evaluate
  • analyze
What to do next:
Look at other essays: