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Band 7

You are studying for a qualification, and you would like some off work to complete it. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - ask for some time off to complete a qualification. - Suggest what you will do later at work if you have time off. - Say how the qualification helps your job or company.

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Dear Mr John, I hope you are doing well and staying healthy. I am writing
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 letter to request a vacation for one week to complete some assignments. I enrolled in the effective communication skills course, which is one month long and offered via online classes. I have to attend all the classes to pass the test. The schedule of classes is flexible so I am managing those simultaneously. I have booked an exam for the following week. I am very nervous about the exam so I have to study all day, which is not possible
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 shifts. I have already started to complete the work assignments in advance to reduce any workload on my colleagues. After my vacation, I am ready to work 24/7 to
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 the pending work. Currently, I am working as a front desk receptionist so
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 qualification will be very beneficial for my job to grab higher opportunities. I will be waiting for your response. Yours Sincerely, John Smith
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coherence cohesion
Make sure to clearly separate different ideas into distinct paragraphs to enhance readability and clarity.
task achievement
Try to provide a bit more detail about how the qualification specifically benefits your job or company. For example, mention specific skills or improvements.
task achievement
The letter has a polite and respectful tone, which is suitable for a formal request to a manager.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing are appropriate and well-structured, giving the letter a formal tone.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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