Given maps illustrate information on how Frenton changed over 32 years between 1990 and 2012. There is High Street passing through the Frenton from south to north and on both sides of the street there are some public buildings, houses and flats.
The presented table demonstrates data about the two groups of people who have different ages average incomes and the number of poor populations in 3 various states in America.
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the figure for young generations is more than old ones; Use synonyms
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Utah
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is roughly the same as each other, but Use synonyms
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is 1000 more than 23,000; Use synonyms
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has 4% less than the previous; Use synonyms
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Utah
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