Students should be taught academic knowledge so that they can pass exams, and skills such as cooking or dressing should not be taught. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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the statements that what should and should not be taught to
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is an important issue. Putting the discussion in a wider context. that
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has always been debatable. Even though some
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think that
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should be taught academic
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. I wholeheartedly believe that
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should taught
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such
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as cooking or anything else not just academics.
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. After which some aspects against that will be presented. On the one hand, some
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agree with
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for some
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. One of the
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is that probably think that smart
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are when you have high academic
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many
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and proud of you if they have good
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mainly in maths or sciences. The best example to illustrate
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if you are good in sciences, a lot of
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argue that you will be successful in your life, you will be a billionaire in future. But in fact, success does not depend on your academic
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. It will become if you are not giving up, diligently and keep trying. I agree that academic
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should be taught so
students
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can pass exams but
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are important as well.
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, many
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disagree with
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for many convincing
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. The Most important reason is that education is crucial to increasing
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.
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, nowadays in school,
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are not taught just about academic
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by their teachers, they
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must have
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beyond their regular classes
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as cooking, swimming, etc in order to relax their brain from stress too much because of sciences. Academic and skill are balanced.
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more beneficial to having both. All in all, when all the specific
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and relevant examples are considered and evaluated. I strongly disagree with that
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because Academic
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is as important as
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too.
students
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should taught both of those.
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Avoid repetition in your arguments. Instead, provide distinct points and expand on them through clear and comprehensive ideas.
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The essay is structured logically, with clear paragraphs for arguments for and against the statement.
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The writer's position is distinct, making it clear that they disagree with the statement and believe in the importance of teaching both academic knowledge and practical skills.
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