The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.

The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting main features.
The given linear process diagram illustrates about life stages of an enormous water-living
fish
called the Salmon from being salmon eggs to the growing period.
Initially
, Female
fish
, which is laid eggs below the reeds. Eggs have been at 5 to 6 months under the tiny stones.
Hence
, It
has
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called "Fry" at 3 to 8cm.
Following
this
, six months later, they are grown as
a
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small
fish
. that named by "Smolt"
furthermore
it would
incread
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increase
increased
between 12 and 15cm.
while
they are
being lived
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in the fast-flowing river. that was called "Smolt".
moreover
, the size measured at 12 to 15cm. Once
this
completed, Adult Salmon was lived Open Sea for Five years. At
this
time It has been at 70 to 76cm.
consequently
fish
becomes
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a
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marvellous throughout the living period.
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