The table shows data about the average income for one person in dollars, across two different age groups: under 18 and over 60, as well as the percentage of the poor population in three states in the US, namely California, Utah, and Florida

The presented table demonstrates data about the two groups of people who have different ages average incomes and the number of poor populations in 3 various states in America.

Overall

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of them except

Florida

the figure for young generations is more than old ones;

moreover

,

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Utah

, which has the lowest income, has fewer changes in the poor line than others.

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for people who have less than 18 years old the main area is Utal by 28%;

then

Florida

and

California

nearly have the same percentage, a small portion,

while

for elderly people the proportion is reverse of the

last

item, so

Florida

by 23% has the first level;

thereafter

,

California

and Utal respectively are 13 and 8

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. The chart shows average income of

Florida

and

California

is roughly the same as each

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, but

California

is 1000 more than 23,000;

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17,000 is the

last

one.

In addition

, the fashion of communities, who are under

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line, has a trend like the prior;

as a result

, the initial is

California

by 16% after that,

Florida

has 4% less than the previous;

furthermore

,

finally

is

Utal

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Utah

by 9%.