The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The supplied table indicates how many
workers
and
factories
were there in the UK and
Wales
between 1851 and 1901. A glance at the graph reveals that the highest
number
of
employees
were
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was
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in 1851.
However
,people were not employed in 1901 which was the fewest
number
of
workers
over the period. In 1851,the
number
of
men
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male
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employees
was 287,100 in the UK and
Wales
,compared to women who were 190,000.(Which was the highest
number
of
workers
over the period).
Moreover
,precisely 721
factories
were constructed in 1881.(Which was the highest percentage of
factories
over the whole year).
In addition
,the percentage of male
employees
in England and
Wales
was 80,123,just ahead of the
number
of female
workers
at 60,000 in 1871.
In contrast
,the
number
of male
workers
in the United Kingdom and
Wales
was a bit more than female
workers
in 1901 at 31,000 and 30,000,
resperctively
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respectively
.(Which was the
fewest
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lowest
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number
of
employees
over the period).
Similarly
,the percentage of
factories
was 225 in England and
Wales
in 1851.(Which was the least
number
of
factories
over the total year).
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Vocabulary: Replace the words workers, factories, wales, number, employees with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 8 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.

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