The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given tables provide data regarding sales of Fairtrade-designated coffee and bananas in two distinct

years

namely 1999 and 2004 in five nations in Europe.

Overall

, it can be seen that

Switzerland

and the UK sold the highest value of coffee in 1999 and 2004 respectively

while

Sweden always accounted for the lowest.

Furthermore

, Belgium and Denmark registered the lowest banana sales in 1999 and 2004 respectively

while

Switzerland

recorded the highest in both

years

Firstly

Switzerland

and the UK recorded the best financial performance in 1999 and 2004 in selling coffee by registering 3 and 20

million

euros

respectively.

Furthermore

, Denmark and Belgium gained between 1 and 2

million

euros

in both

years

while

Sweden witnessed the poorest performance in 1999

as well as

2004 by gaining only 0.8 and 1

million

euros

respectively.

Secondly

, Belgium and Denmark sold the least amount of bananas in 1999 and 2004 by experiencing an income of only 0.6 and 0.9

million

euros

respectively.

Moreover

Switzerland

was the top performer in both

years

in the banana trade and its revenue accounted for 15 and 47

million

euros

in the first and the second

years

, in sequence. The UK witnessed a dismal sales performance of only 1

million

euros

in 1999 but

then

it rebounded and secured a solid 5.5

million

euros

in income in 2004.

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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries. Summary the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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