The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040.
The line graph depicts the proportion of
people
living in cities in four countries
in Asia over the 50-year period between 1970 and 2020, with anticipation for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the percentage of the popualtion
in all Correct your spelling
population
countries
is projected to rise. Furthermore
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beginning
Indonesia
had the lowest poeple
.
In 1970, the proportion of the Correct your spelling
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popualtion
living in cities in Correct your spelling
population
Indonesia
stood at around 12%, lower than the other three countries
. While
at the same year, this
figure for Malaysia was responsible for 30%. For the next 50 years, the percentage of people
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Indonesia
and Malaysia rose subtantially
to approximately 50% and 72%, respectively. It is expected that the prospective figures for Correct your spelling
substantially
Indonesia
and Malaysia will witness an increase and reach about 60% and 81% in 2040.
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the Philipines
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Philippines
Thailand
, in 1970, people
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the Philipines
Philipines
accounted for nearly 32%, Correct your spelling
Philippines
while
this
figure for Thailand
was just under 20%. Over the following 50 years, both both countries
experienced a rise in their people
's population living in towns and the percentage of the popualtion
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population
Philipines
rose to just above 42% and the figure for Thailand
climbed to closely
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the Philipines
Philipines
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Philippines
Thailand
will have been about 50% and 45%.Submitted by ielts7683 on
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