The graph below show the income of four cafes in new york over last year

The line graph compares the revenue of four different cafes in New York in the previous

year

.

Overall

,

it is clear that

there was an upward trend in the

income

of all given types of cafes,

excepting

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the tea rooms with opposite advances. We can see that wifi cafes witnessed remarkable developments over

last

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year

. Looking at the chart, in the first month of the

year

, Cafe

cool

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recorded the lowest

income

at only 30,000 $ in comparison to 50,000 $

of

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wifi

cafe

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cafes

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. During five months from

January

to May, the earnings in

this

field constantly fluctuated and climbed to 40,000$ before hitting a low under 20,000$ in June.

Then

,

this

figure

experienced a significant increase, peaking at about 120,000$ in December. In

January

, the revenue of

internet express

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stood at 100,000$. And

then

,

this

figure

continuously declined to 80,000$ in June. Second half of

last

year

, Internet

express

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recorded a rapid rise in

income

and got roughly 140,000$

spending

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. It is noticeable that the Wifi - Cafe experienced the fastest growth

last

year

. Beginning at just 50,000$

earnings

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in

January

,

this

figure

had a slight increase over 9 months first and dramatically rose in the

last

quarter by about 130,000$.

By contrast

, the tea room witnessed a sizable decrease over one

year

ago. The highest

income

of

this

figure

was seen in March, at under 180,000$, nearly 20,000$ more than

January

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. Since that time, the tea

room

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earning

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reduced substantially and

hitted

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a low of 50,000$ in the

last

month of the

year

.