The arts, including art, music and theatre are considered to be important in society. Do you think the arts still have a place amongst our modern lifestyles? Should the arts be included in the school curriculum؟

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of

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arts

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the arts

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are really

rilevant

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relevant

in society

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because these subjects can elevate cultural status.

Arts

in general are

also

important to know

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the history

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of the place,

for example

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visited Firenze

last

year and

i

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went to Museo degli Uffizi, i saw a lot of portraits about many

period

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of human history, so

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could understand the differences and

i

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could compare trends of different periods so

arts

contain thoughts about ancient ages and with these we can discover somethings

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about tradition. Music is still

such

an important instrument to create

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a relationship

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between what the compositor wanted to transfer and what the listener heard not only musical notes but

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what

armony

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harmony

provoke

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in his mind.

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theatre but

i

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want to put in

arts

also

cinema because

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think films include all of them: theatre because actors recite like a theatrical performance, there is music with soundtrack and song in some parts of

film

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the film

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and there is art because

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paesagistic

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paganistic

image, time-lapse, suggestive video and picture

in my opinion

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are

also

art.

However

arts

are the description of human knowledge forever and we can't replace

its

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, without them we will lose

consciouness

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consciousness

about

ourself

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,

for

this

reason

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we must cultivate

arts

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in our lives and

also

because

arts

are important

vehicols

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vehicles

to diffuse strong messages immediately

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we, thanks

arts

,explain what we have in our mind in a simply and

direcly

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directly

direct

way, especially in

this

modern age where interactions are so difficult.