The line graph and pie chart below show information on crime in the UK for the last year.

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age

and types of

crime

committed in the United Kingdom

last

year, respectively.

Overall

, it can be clearly observed that

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and young adults

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prominent figures rate of crimes,

whereas

that of the

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people

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between 30s-60s was far more relatively low as they aged.

However

, it is interesting to note that

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crimes

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founded in Britain was violence.

To begin

with, a closer look at the line graph showing

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between

age

and

crime

reported that British teenagers at the

age

of 16 to 24 demonstrated with highest jump

of

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crime

statistics among other ages in a range of 60,000-

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cases. Surprisingly, the youngest

crime

committer

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the

age

of 12 doing bad things at 5,000 cases,

whereas

those who

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of 20 reach

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peak at 80,000 cases. In regard to types of

crime

committed, it is noticeable that violent

crime

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accounted for the largest proportion at 46%. Followed by property and

drug related

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crime

at

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at 23% and 22%, respectively.

Additionally

, the public order

crime

was the fewest at 9%.