The chart below shows the average price per kilo of clothing imported into the European Union from seven major countries of origin in 1997 and 2003. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The bar chart displays the average cost per
kilo
in
Change preposition
of
importation
clothes to seven Replace the word
importing
european
countries Change the capitalization
European
during
1997 and 2003.
Change preposition
between
Overall
, it is clear that
argentina
has the highest importation in both 1997 and 2003. Followed by Change the capitalization
Argentina
Change the capitalization
Brazill
brazil
brazill
in the second place, Change the capitalization
Brazill
while
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India
india
and Change the capitalization
India
Change the capitalization
Bangladesh
bangladesh
were the least consumers among other nations
Looking Change the capitalization
Bangladesh
in
the Change preposition
at
informations
in more detail, in 1993 Change the wording
information
pieces of information
argentina
Change the capitalization
Argentina
had
spent nearly 27 Unnecessary verb
apply
pounds
for
one Change preposition
on
kilo
of clothing. Moreover
, in 2003 argentina
had Change the capitalization
Argentina
fall
Wrong verb form
fallen
slighty
to more Correct your spelling
slightly
then
25. Replace the word
than
Brazill
importation was at the same level in both years with almost 23 Correct your spelling
Brazil
pound
for each Change to a plural noun
pounds
kilo
of chothing
. Correct your spelling
clothing
While jaban
ranked at the third place. In 1997 jaban was at 15 Correct your spelling
While Jaban
pounds
per one
Correct pronoun usage
apply
kilo
. For the other year
jaban decreased to around 13 Add a comma
year,
pounds
for
Change preposition
per
kilo
.
The avrage
price per Correct your spelling
average
kilo
for the other three countries. china, india
, and Change the capitalization
India
bangladesh
in Change the capitalization
Bangladesh
year
1997 Change the article
the year
was
under 10 Change the verb form
were
pounds
respectively, however
in 2003 all of the three nations had Add a comma
however,
a
significant growth. Each Remove the article
apply
conutry
almost doubled. China went from 10 to 17 Correct your spelling
country
pounds
, india
went from 7 to 14 Change the capitalization
India
pounds
and bangladesh
went from 3 to 6 Change the capitalization
Bangladesh
pounds
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Vocabulary: Replace the words kilo, pounds with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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