The chart below shows the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habits in five Australian cities. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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Sydney
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Hobart
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, 49.8 per cent
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61 per cent
of city
residents
. In Brisbane
, citizens went to a cafe
for coffee
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tea
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55.4 per cent
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62.7 per cent
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cent
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