The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above illustrates the
rate
of recycling amoung
Correct your spelling
among
households
of
three European countries between 2005 and 2015.
Peaked at 50 %, France Change preposition
in
has
the most household recycling rates among the rest in 2005, but the Wrong verb form
had
rate
has shown
a gradual Wrong verb form
showed
deline
to 30% in 2013, with a gentle bounce back in 2015 at 40%.
Around 35% of Correct your spelling
decline
the
British Correct article usage
apply
households
recycled in 2005, with the recycling trend
Add the comma(s)
trend,
pleateaued
between 2007 and 2009 at 40%. The recycling Correct your spelling
plateaued
rate
then
increased significantly to around 55% in 2011 and over 60% in 2015 after a gentle rise.
With only around 20%, German households
had the least
recycling rates in 2005 compared to the others. Correct word choice
lowest
However
, there was a continuous increase in the recycling rate
of German households
with the rate
overtooked
France after 2009 and almost Correct your spelling
overtaking
tripled
in 2015 at around 57%.Wrong verb form
tripling
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