The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows the household recyclling rates in three different countries between 2005 and 2015.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph above illustrates the
rate
of recycling
amoung
Correct your spelling
among
households
of
Change preposition
in
show examples
three European countries between 2005 and 2015. Peaked at 50 %, France
has
Wrong verb form
had
show examples
the most household recycling rates among the rest in 2005, but the
rate
has shown
Wrong verb form
showed
show examples
a gradual
deline
Correct your spelling
decline
to 30% in 2013, with a gentle bounce back in 2015 at 40%. Around 35% of
the
Correct article usage
apply
show examples
British
households
recycled in 2005, with the recycling
trend
Add the comma(s)
trend,
show examples
pleateaued
Correct your spelling
plateaued
between 2007 and 2009 at 40%. The recycling
rate
then
increased significantly to around 55% in 2011 and over 60% in 2015 after a gentle rise. With only around 20%, German
households
had the
least
Correct word choice
lowest
show examples
recycling rates in 2005 compared to the others.
However
, there was a continuous increase in the recycling
rate
of German
households
with the
rate
overtooked
Correct your spelling
overtaking
France after 2009 and almost
tripled
Wrong verb form
tripling
show examples
in 2015 at around 57%.
Submitted by 788seal on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rate, households with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • line graph
  • household recycling rates
  • trend analysis
  • comparison
  • significant
  • increase/decrease
  • fluctuations
  • plateau
  • progress
  • environmental implications
  • rate
  • peak
  • upward/downward trend
  • percentage
  • consistently
  • period
  • surpass
  • level off
  • stagnate
  • benchmark
  • time frame
  • sustainable practices
  • waste management
  • recycle
  • dispose
  • landfill
  • renewable resource
  • conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • green initiative
What to do next:
Look at other essays: