The following two pie charts display the results of a survey into the popularity of various leisure activities among European adults in 1985 and 1995. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 word
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The two
chart
above Change to a plural noun
charts
illustrated
the preferences Wrong verb form
illustrate
of
leisure activities of adults in Europe in 1985 and 1995 respectively.
Nearly 40% of the respondents Change preposition
for
have chosen
Wrong verb form
chose
talk
to someone in their leisure time in 1985, with the Fix the infinitive
to talk
overall
rate dropped
to just over 30% in 1995. Despite there Wrong verb form
dropping
was
an increase in the interest Replace the word
being
to
"talking with friends", the preference Change preposition
in
of
"talking with family" fell Change preposition
for
more
than Change preposition
by more
a
half after a decade.
The percentage of European adults using digital technology as their leisure Correct article usage
apply
activities
almost doubled in 1995, with an addition of 27% of the respondents Fix the agreement mistake
activity
selected
"playing computer games" combined with 30% of them Wrong verb form
selecting
choosed
to watch TV, which has a rate almost similar to 1985.
There was a dramatic decrease in the Correct your spelling
choosing
amount
of respondents choosing "eating out" and "other" in 1995 compared to 1985, with both of the categories Change the quantifier
number
dropped
by Wrong verb form
dropping
two-third
to 8% and 2% respectively.Correct your spelling
two-thirds
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