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The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.

The pie chart shows the percentage of car ownership by make in three countries in 2015. Summarize the information by select and report the main features, make comparison where relevant.
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The pie chart illustrates the information
in
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per
cent
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 of car ownership in three different
countries
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 in years 2015.
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, there are 7
countries
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 that calculated here and China dominated the category of world passenger car production.
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,
Middle
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 East or
Afirca
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Africa
 became the least.
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 with, Greater China had
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a percentage
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at
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of
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 26 per
cent
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.
Then
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, on the second rank, there is Europe with 25 per
cent
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.
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, more than
a
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half of the pie chart was
had
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made
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 by these two
state
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. Afterwards, four other
countries
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 experienced
percentage
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a percentage
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 below 20 per
cent
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. North America got 19 per
cent
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. Later, Europe got 16 per
cent
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. Individually, South Asia, South America, Middle East or Africa
was
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were
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 8 per
cent
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, 4 per
cent
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, and 2 per
cent
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. To
conlude
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conclude
, there
is
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are
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 no specific reasons why
this
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 trend
like
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is like
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this
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. Based on
data
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the data
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, what can be known is the ownership of cars
were
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was
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 very low. It can be seen by only two out of
sevven
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seven
countries
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 that had per centage above 20 per
cent
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.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words cent, countries with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • percentage
  • car ownership
  • make
  • country
  • comparison
  • distribution
  • vehicle preferences
  • automotive market
  • popular brands
  • market share
  • dominant
  • proportion
  • trend
  • variation
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