The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and in the United Kingdom spend on petrol. Summerise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

The graph below gives information about how much people in the United States and in the United Kingdom spend on petrol.

Summerise the information and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
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The given line chart compares data about the amount of money that people who are from The USA and the UK spend on petrol.
Overall
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, It is important that the English who have more money use more fuel
while
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the richest American populations have less usage;
furthermore
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, Americans spend more money on fuel than the British.
According to
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the graph, the USA dips somewhat from poorest to richest owing to the fact that the first section is for the poorest communities;
moreover
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, the really poorest inhabitants spend 4% of income on fuel;
however
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,
this
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trend climbs moderately in the poorest section and reach vertex at 5.3%;
thereafter
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, the
second,
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section
that is
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for middle- income starting from 5%;
then
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it scored 4% after that it reduced to nearly 2.7%. The UK diagram shows it has leapt direction from the poorest to the wealthiest communities. For the poverty
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it is 0.5% to 2.5%. Later the second group which is middle-income has
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in the final which is equal to the American proportion;
additionally
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, the richest line hit the peak at 4.1;
then
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it decreased to 3.8%.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Petrol expenditure
  • Expenditure trends
  • Spending comparison
  • Fluctuations in expenditure
  • Car dependency
  • Public transportation
  • Seasonal variations
  • Global oil prices
  • Government policies
  • Environmental concerns
  • Fuel tax
  • Spending habits
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