The maps below show the centre of a small town called /slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show the centre of a small town called /slip as it is now, and

plans for its development.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and

make comparisons where relevant.
The map details the renovation plan of a commercial
centre
located in Islip town.
Overall
, the most significant alteration of the
centre
is the addition of customer-faced amenities including a bus station and car
park
.
Firstly
, we can see that there are two strip malls on the lateral of the main
road
.
Additionally
, it is apparent that housing makes up the majority of Islip town
centre
,
whereas
a variety of accommodations is erected to the south of the main
road
. For the purpose of leisure, a
park
is built on the right side of the housing area. Turning to the proposed plan of reconstruction, the future plan projects that the main
road
will be pedestrianized, meanwhile, one side of the strip mall will be demolished and transformed into several infrastructures
such
as a bus station, car
park
, shopping
centre
, the other streets will remain unchanged as strips shops. In order to make room for the newly-built facilities, the area of housing is going to be diminished,
as well as
for the
park
. Another noteworthy point is that the
road
for transportation will be reconstructed into a dual carriageway to minimize the chance of traffic
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urban planning
  • town centre
  • development
  • infrastructure
  • residential
  • commercial
  • pedestrian
  • amenities
  • refurbishment
  • green spaces
  • public transport
  • conservation
  • modernization
  • facilities
  • expansion
  • renovation
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