Governments give a lot of support to artists, even though some people think it is a waste of money that could have been used elsewhere. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that

state

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is wasting money on supporting artists which is

waste

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a waste

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of resources which could be used somewhere else.

While

supporting talent is

good

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way to go for a developing country, I believe there are many other priorities where lives can be saved should be focused first to use any amount. On the one hand, for a thriving nation,

state

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is responsible

to increase

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talent among people to make their country proud. Artists go

extra

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mile

for

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apply

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their whole

life

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lives

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to be famous and they need support from

government

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the government

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to be in a position where they can

achive

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achieve

success.

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, India

reinforce

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every talent possible,

it does

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apply

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not

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no

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matter if it is acting or singing, and they have already achieved their goal and now

whole

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world knows

bollywood

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Bollywood

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for

it's

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its

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creativity and music.

However

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I believe that

this

amount which is invested every year in movies by the

state

can help to give shelter and food to many people.

On the other hand

, many lives can be saved just by using a little amount. Each year hundreds of farmers suicide because the

state

ignore

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ignores

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their needs. their

day to day

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day-to-day

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survival is very hard, they can't even afford one meal for their family, because, they have to pay

heavy

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the heavy

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loan

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loans

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which

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apply

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they took from

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the bank

a bank

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bank

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banks

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on

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high interest rates for cultivating their lands.

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, In

india

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India

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, for many

farmers

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farmers,

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it is very hard to survive these days because they are not being paid enough for their products and the

governement

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government

is not focussing on

this

matter so it is easy for them to die rather than

paying

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pay

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heavy loans. I believe that

this

type of

situations

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can be easily handled if they focus on

this

first because they are feeding

whole

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the whole

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nation.

To conclude

,

Although

reinforcing artists can make a country popular,

however

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farmers

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farmers'

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needs and poverty should be focused

first

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on first

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to save lives.