You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

In

this

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era of technology, the

production

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of

movies

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and songs has been gaining more and more popularity drastically,

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however

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there exists a wide range of

movies

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and productions

for example

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action, drama, comedy, fantasy, romance etc.

Due to

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rapid

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the rapid

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growth of technology

,

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and, availability

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availability

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the availability

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of

medium

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media

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the

level

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of interest of people watching television, cinema and home

theater

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theatre

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has increased effectively. Here we are given two types of bar graphs where it has been demonstrated that

wide

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a wide

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range of

movies

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are produced as the years

increased

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increase

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.

Furthermore

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from the bar chart

firstly

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we can observe that in

the

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apply

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1996 the

level

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of

production

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was less with respect to the sales of the movie tickets.

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,

these

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the

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sales of the ticket

has

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have

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also

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increased as the year increased

along with

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the population and the evolving of technology. When

make

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making

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an observation

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observation

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observations

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with

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of

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the granular

level

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of

the

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apply

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movie

production

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we can distinguish that people have shown more demand for the

production

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of

the

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apply

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comedy and drama. But for the fantasy and romance

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movies

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movies,

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the

level

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of sales of the ticket has decreased

along with

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the

production

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of the

movies

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of same type

also

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.

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we can conclude that people are more inclined towards

the

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apply

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drama and comedy

movies

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instead

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of fantasy and romance

gener

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genre

genres

.