You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graphs below show the total percentage of films released and the total percentage of ticket sales in 1996 and 2006 in a country. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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In
this
era of technology, the production
of movies
and songs has been gaining more and more popularity drastically, however
there exists a wide range of Add a comma
however,
movies
and productions for example
action, drama, comedy, fantasy, romance etc. Due to
rapid
growth of technologyCorrect article usage
the rapid
,
Correct word choice
and, availability
availability
of Correct article usage
the availability
medium
the Replace the word
media
level
of interest of people watching television, cinema and home theater
has increased effectively.
Here we are given two types of bar graphs where it has been demonstrated that Change the spelling
theatre
wide
range of Correct article usage
a wide
movies
are produced as the years increased
. Wrong verb form
increase
Furthermore
from the bar chart firstly
we can observe that in the
1996 the Change the article
apply
level
of production
was less with respect to the sales of the movie tickets. For instance
, these
sales of the ticket Correct determiner usage
the
has
Change the verb form
have
also
increased as the year increased along with
the population and the evolving of technology. When make
Change the verb form
making
Add an article
an observation
observation
Fix the agreement mistake
observations
with
the granular Change preposition
of
level
of the
movie Correct article usage
apply
production
we can distinguish that people have shown more demand for the production
of the
comedy and drama. But for the fantasy and romance Correct article usage
apply
movies
the Add a comma
movies,
level
of sales of the ticket has decreased along with
the production
of the movies
of same type also
.
Therefore
we can conclude that people are more inclined towards the
drama and comedy Correct article usage
apply
movies
instead
of fantasy and romance gener
.Correct your spelling
genre
genres
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