The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.

The graphs below illustrate the gadgets individuals in the 18 to 25 age categories utilized to watch TV channels in Canada in 2009 and 2019.
The pie chart gives information about the average individuals around the ages of 18 to 25 who used to watch TV channels in Canada between 2009 and 2019.
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, it is evident that in 2009 the most popular category was conventional TV amongst
Candaians
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Canadian
adults,
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in the year
2019
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it was the least popular . At first glance , it is obvious that a significant portion of
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population ,34%, preferred to watch Television in 2009.
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,during the same
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the second most favoured category was
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at around 20 per cent of preferences . in the year 2009
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categories
such
as desktop
computer
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computers
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and mobile
phone
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phones
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also
have their share at exactly 18% and 15% respectively. the remaining categories are the least
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chosen
choosen
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chosen
by
Candaians
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Canadians
On the other hand
in 2019 flat screen was the dominant category at about 27% .Followed by mobile phones which accounted for 26% .
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both desktop computers and mobile phones shared
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percentage at exactly 12% .
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.

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  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • illustrate
  • gadgets
  • utilized
  • age categories
  • watching TV channels
  • comparison
  • popularity
  • notable trends
  • increase/decrease
  • devices
  • decade
  • advancements in technology
  • user preferences
  • speculation
  • future trends
  • conclusion
  • implications
  • technology and media companies
  • lifestyle
  • habits
  • target age group
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