The maps shows the changes of a Stockford city in 1986 and now. Summarize all the infomation in the picture and give comparison.

The maps shows the changes of a Stockford city in 1986 and now. Summarize all the infomation in the picture and give comparison.
The two maps illustrate Stockford city before its redevelopment in 1986 and the present map of the city. The North East
area
of the town used to have
farmland
, a primary school, and a bridge. Nowadays, the
farmland
was
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demolished. A part of the demolished
farmland
was redeveloped into a housing
area
and the rest remained untouched. The primary school was expanded and renovated to a much bigger school. The bridge that has existed since 1986 still exists in the present
date
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. The North West
area
used to have a number of shops and a post office, but now only the post office lasts, the remaining shops were demolished and converted into housing.
The
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South East
area
of the town, there used to be gardens, a large house, and a single large tree. Now, both the gardens and the house were redeveloped into a retirement home, and the big tree was cut down and the space was repurposed into a housing
area
. The South West
area
of Stockford city used to have
farmland
and a river stoke. In the present day, only the river stroke lasted, whilst the
farmland
was deconstructed and made into a
hosuing
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housing
area
. Aside from that, some areas along the river stoke were developed into a housing
area
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, farmland with synonyms.
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