The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The two maps depict a plan to convert an industrial
area
into a residential place. Overall
, all the facilities related to manufacturing processes will be demolished and replaced with a communal space and housing.
The factory along Pie Walk will be replaced with an apartment and a parking area
, with the
considerable increase Correct article usage
a
of
the combined size. Parking garages are Change preposition
in
also
going to be set where
six offices and a canteen are currently located. Change preposition
up where
Moreover
, communal gardens will be newly established at the centre of the area
, where several trees will also
be planted.
The area
of the entrance and the reception on the north side will be utilised to build three houses that
is
going to be next to the gardens. Change the verb form
are
Furthermore
, there will be two houses along with
Toe Lane as the storage and parking area
is expected to be removed. In addition
, each complex is separated by a private road.Submitted by 20dm056e on
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