The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below give information about a plan to redevelop an industrial site.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps depict a plan to convert an industrial
area
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into a residential place.
Overall
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, all the facilities related to manufacturing processes will be demolished and replaced with a communal space and housing. The factory along Pie Walk will be replaced with an apartment and a parking
area
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, with
the
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a
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considerable increase
of
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in
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the combined size. Parking garages are
also
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going to be set
where
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up where
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six offices and a canteen are currently located.
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, communal gardens will be newly established at the centre of the
area
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, where several trees will
also
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be planted. The
area
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of the entrance and the reception on the north side will be utilised to build three houses
that
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is
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are
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going to be next to the gardens.
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, there will be two houses
along with
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Toe Lane as the storage and parking
area
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is expected to be removed.
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, each complex is separated by a private road.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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