The chart below shows the percentage of adults of different age in the UK who used the Internet every day from 2003-2006. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The graph illustrates the proportion of Internet
users
in five age
groups from aged
16 to more than 65 years old from 2003 until 2006.
Change the form of the verb
age
Overall
, as older
the Correct article usage
the older
users
get, they became
less available online than the younger ones. We can Wrong verb form
become
also
notice that as the year changes, there is an upward tendency of people accessing the online network.
Web users
aged 16-24 are significantly the easiest you
Correct pronoun usage
apply
will
most likely to find online, Correct your spelling
and
whereas
it will get harder to find an older person. Especially in 2003, it is definitely difficult to find elderly aged more than 65 years old wandering online. In contrast
, people aged over 45 have more awareness of being online than the older age
group. Regardless of the
Correct article usage
apply
age
, eventually
by Add a comma
eventually,
2006
internet Add a comma
2006,
is
accessible to everyone as the total Wrong verb form
will be
users
mostly Correct quantifier usage
number of users
increase
by 20% in all Wrong verb form
increased
age
group
since 2003, with Fix the agreement mistake
groups
exception
Correct article usage
the exception
to
the Change preposition
of
teenager
group with only a slight increase of 10%.Replace the word
teenage
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words users, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 2 times.
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