The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000. ▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph below shows changes in the amount and type of fast food consumed by Australian teenagers from 1975 to 2000.

▪️Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The line chart illustrates the consumption differences in the quantity and the form of take-out food by
adolescence
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between 1975 and 2000 in Australia.
Over all
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, we observed that the figures
of
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Pizza and Fish and Chips consumers have increased significantly during the period,
while
the purchase
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Hamburger sandwiches
were
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dropped dramatically. On closer examination, the amount of Pizza buyers
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a considerable peak, more than 80, from 1975 to almost the middle of 1985,
then
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rise until the first half of 1995 reaching up to 100
purchase
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.
In addition
, the number of youngers who decided to buy Hamburger
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increased rapidly over the time span until the middle of 1995,from 2 to 82
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,
then
remained stable to the end of the duration. Surprisingly, the number of teenagers who bought Fish and Ships experienced a steep drop throughout the time. At the
start
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it fluctuated
down
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between 100 and 80
order
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orders
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, from 1975 to 1895,
then
declined rapidly until 2000.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "rapidly" was used 2 times.
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