In recent years,” responsible tourists” have paid attention to preserving both culture and environmrnt of the places thay visit. However, some poelpe say that it is impossible to be a “responsible tourist”. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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With the rise in tourists and tourism,
people
who call themselves "responsible tourists" have emerged, who claim that they pay attention to preserving both the culture and environment of the places they visit, whereas
, some people
argue that it is impossible to be a responsible tourist
. This
essay will look into why I think people
can be responsible tourists and how it is not impossible to be one
.
Firstly
, one
can be a responsible tourist
by knowing about the general laws of a country
he/she travels to, this
way he/she can make sure to not cause any problems in the country
they are travelling to. Moreover
, one
can be a responsible tourist
by paying attention and preserving the environment. To be specific, not littering and not damaging the flora and fauna of the country
you are travelling to can make you a responsible tourist
. For instance
, when visiting a flower sanctuary on my trip to Thailand, I made sure to not pluck any flowers and observe them from a distance.
Lastly
, one
can be a responsible tourist
by simply not damaging the monuments and buildings. Monuments and buildings of a country
preserve the country
's culture and heritage, destroying them by means of scribbling or damaging them would be the actions of an irresponsible tourist
. For example
, I have seen people
scribble on monuments like the Taj Mahal which disrespects the culture and heritage of the people
of my country
. Furthermore
, one
can be a responsible tourist
by being kind to the people
who live in that country
, one
must respect their place and them.
To conclude
, I think one
should be mindful and aware of the country
they are travelling to if they want to be a responsible tourist
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