You have a spare room in your Apartment that you would like to rent out to a student. Write a letter to your Student Accommodation Officer of local college and say 1. Where is your apartment located? - close to university 2. When will the room be available - Room will be available next month 3. What are the requirements for a student to stay?- no parties , no loud music other restrictions.
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Dear Sir,
I am writing
this
letter to inform you that I want to rent out a single room
in an apartment which is located in front of the University.
My name is Rhea, and I am living in a two bedroom
apartment , which is situated in front of the University campus . Currently, I am looking for a Add a hyphen
two-bedroom
student
to share accomodation
with me . I am enrolled in Correct your spelling
accommodation
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a third
third year
master's degree in law Add a hyphen
third-year
in
your University .
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at
Room
will be available from next month from September 1st . Most of the students are coming in the fall semester and start looking for Add an article
The room
the
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a
room
. For one person rent will be $900 which includes two meals , Wifi and laundry . Although
most of the accomodations
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accommodation
are
expensive, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
but
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apply
this
room
is really affordable for a new student
.
There are some basic requirements in order to stay here such
as no parties , no loud music and maintain cleaniness
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cleanliness
everytime
. It is a wonderful apartment with Replace the word
every time
peaceful
environment that every Add an article
a peaceful
student
needs . I attach
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have attached
address
with Correct article usage
the address
this
email and
please contact me Correct word choice
apply
on
604-396-8539,if any Change preposition
at
student
shows interest in this
.
I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours faithfully,
Roopkamal kaur.Submitted by kmlchahal97 on
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Ensure you re-read your letter to correct small grammatical errors, such as missing punctuation and agreement in number (e.g., 'cleaniness' should be 'cleanliness').
suitable writing tone
Try to maintain a consistent tone throughout the letter. Starting the letter with full formality is good but keep it consistent until the end for a stronger impression.
task achievement
You provided all the necessary details regarding the apartment, availability, cost, and requirements in a clear manner.
coherence cohesion
The letter is generally well-organized with logical structure and clear paragraphs.
suitable writing tone
You maintained a polite and formal tone, which is suitable for the context of writing to a Student Accommodation Officer.