The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighbouring town, have developed over three different time periods(1962, 1985, and the present). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The pictures below exhibit the changes that

had taken

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took

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place in

the

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apply

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Meadowside

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village

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Village

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and

Fonton

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in the years 1962, 1985 and

present

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the present

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Overall

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, it's obvious that rural and urban places

finally

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emerged and there are several facilities built during these years. In 1965, the

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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are

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isolated places without any roads between them. When it comes to 1985, we can see that both

Meadowside

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Village

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and

Fonton

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had been expanded, and a road was built to connect them.

Furthermore

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, in the

Meadowside

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village

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, the road from its north to the southeast was upgraded and could go through the whole

village

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, with a leisure complex constructed on its west side.

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, a housing estate and a superstore were put up in the west and south of

Meadowside

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Village

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respectively.

According to

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the

last

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map, it's evident that the

Fonton

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continued to enlarge and now covers most areas of the picture.

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, a station has been developed in the centre place, with a new hotel on its north, a railway connecting it to the east side of the picture and a business peak crossing the road on its south respectively. At the same time, the

Meadowside

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village

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has been converted into the

Meadowside

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suburbs in the origin position.

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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, village, fonton with synonyms.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

211 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

isolated community
infrastructure
housing estate
supermarket
sports complex
urban area
business park
railway station
connectivity
economic growth
population density
transformation
merge into
expansion
development over time

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The maps illustrate how Meadowside village and Fonton, which is a neighbouring town, have developed over three different time periods(1962, 1985, and the present). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

In many schools, sports lessons are part of the timetable, because it is important for both boys and girls to participate in sports. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

In many countries, the amount o f crime is increasing What do you think are the main causes o f crime? How can we deal with those causes?

Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organisation. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed?