The pie chart shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during 1990s. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pie chart illustrates the global
degradation
of agricultural land
worldwide which was driven by three main factors. The table shows the three affected regions
by the causes in the 1990s. When considered together, there is no correlation between the two sets of data.
Globally, there are four main causes of unproductive land
, including overgrazing at 35%, deforestation
at 30%, overcultivation
at 28%, and Correct your spelling
over-cultivation
over cultivation
other factor
at 7%. Change the wording
another factor
other factors
However
, these four factors do not directly affected
the Change the verb form
affect
land
in the three regions
.
First, land
degradation
was caused by different factors in some regions
. In Europe, deforestation
was the leading factor responsible for the total land
degraded at 23% with 9.8% deforestation
, followed by over-cultivation at 7.7%, and over-grazing had a small contribution at 5.5%.
In Oceania, over-grazing was the most significant cause of land
degradation
, affecting by11.3%, while
deforestation
had a minor impact at 1.7%. Over-cultivation did not contribute to land
degradation
in this
region, resulting in a total degradation
of 13%.
North America had less unproductive land
with a total of 5%. Over-cultivation had the largest impact at 3.3%, while
over-grazing caused 1.5%, and deforestation
was less significant at 0.2% of degradation
.
Overall
, over-grazing and deforestation
were the leading causes of land
degradation
globally, but have varied significantly across different regions
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