Both government investment in public transport systems and reductions in public transport ticket prices will help to reduce transport pollution greatly. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
When city
adminitration
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administration
develop
better Correct subject-verb agreement
develops
transformation
systems and the prices of public transformation
is
decreased, Correct subject-verb agreement
are
transport
pollution
will dramaticaly
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dramatically
reduce
. People will start to Wrong verb form
reduced
use
public transformation
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transportation
common
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commonly
economical
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economic
time
management in traffic. I strongly believe that, when they begin to use
public vechiles
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vehicles
transport
pollution
will decrease automatically, becuase
users will not drive their own cars. In Correct your spelling
because
this
essay
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essay,
that
how people can Correct word choice
apply
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be encourge
encourge
to start to Correct your spelling
encouraged
use
public transformation
, in order to reduce pollution
.
With the economical aspect, for individuals using their own car is overpriced. Fuel is not only
outcome, Add an article
the only
an only
maintaince
costs and parking costs are Correct your spelling
maintenance
also
huge drwabacks
of using Correct your spelling
drawbacks
drawback
own
car. Correct pronoun usage
your own
While
public transportation
costs cheap enough, passengers can consider using it, instead
of their private cars. For instance
, I use
public transformation
to avoid cost
of my car.
Nowadays Add an article
the cost
time
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them
use
all the minutes efficiently. Especially in rush hours problem getting bigger. When city
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a city
the city
transportation
system, which help
to manage Change the verb form
helps
time
, passengers will tend to use
public transportation
. Having an efficient route of
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for
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and reduce
reduce
the delaying Wrong verb form
reducing
time
for vechiles
can be Correct your spelling
vehicles
benefical
examples for Correct your spelling
beneficial
enhance
the Change the verb form
enhancing
transformation
systems.Additionaly
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Additionally
while
using public transport
passengers can find time
for themselves, such
as reading book
or Fix the agreement mistake
books
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doing
researchs
. Correct your spelling
research
For instance
, I read 1 book every month thanks to public transportation
.
To sum up
, finance and time
management is the most efficient method to encouruge
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encourage
vechiles
, which will lead to decreasing Correct your spelling
vehicles
transport
pollution
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