The maps below show the centre of a small town called /slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The maps below show the centre of a small town called /slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

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The two maps detail the present view of Islip town centre, and how it will change after a renovation plan in the future.

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, the most significant alterations after reconstruction are the addition of customer-faced amenities and a ring road that surrounds the place.

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, we can see that there are two strip malls on each side of the main road.

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, it is apparent that housing makes up the majority of

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area,

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a variety of accommodations is erected. For the purpose of leisure, a park is built on the right side of the housing. Turning to the proposed plan of reconstruction, the blueprint projects that the main route will be pedestrianized, meanwhile, the north section of the shops will be demolished and transformed into additional facilities

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as a bus station, car park, shopping centre, and

other

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side will remain unchanged

instead

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. The housing part is going to be diminished,

as well as

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for the park. Another noteworthy point is that a dual carriageway will be constructed and replace the original single-way road to minimize congestion.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

179 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

urban planning
town centre
development
infrastructure
residential
commercial
pedestrian
amenities
refurbishment
green spaces
public transport
conservation
modernization
facilities
expansion
renovation

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