The maps below show the centre of a small town called /slip as it is now, and plans for its development. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps detail the present view of Islip town centre, and how it will change after a renovation plan in the future.
Overall
, the most significant alterations after reconstruction are the addition of customer-faced amenities and a ring road that surrounds the place.
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Firstly
, we can see that there are two strip malls on each side of the main road. Linking Words
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, it is apparent that housing makes up the majority of Linking Words
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whereas
a variety of accommodations is erected. For the purpose of leisure, a park is built on the right side of the housing.
Turning to the proposed plan of reconstruction, the blueprint projects that the main route will be pedestrianized, meanwhile, the north section of the shops will be demolished and transformed into additional facilities Linking Words
such
as a bus station, car park, shopping centre, andLinking Words
other
side will remain unchanged Change the wording
another
instead
. The housing part is going to be diminished, Linking Words
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for the park. Another noteworthy point is that a dual carriageway will be constructed and replace the original single-way road to minimize congestion.Linking Words
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