The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in Calgary, 2000-2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph compares the yearly
sales
made by three bakeries (Amandine
Bakery
,Mari
Bakeshop
, and Bolo
Cakery
) over the period of 10 years from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the sales
of all the following bakeries increased over the years; however
, Mari
Bakeshop
sales
dropped frequently.
In 2000, The Mari
Bakeshop
dominated the market with its competitors falling far behind in sales
, and it generated around $80K in revenue. The figure for the Amandine
Bakery
stood at nearly $55k, while
the Bolo
Cakery
made just about $20k. Over the course of the next 5 years, the sales
for Bolo
Cakery
experienced a significant surge in income, and it doubled to nearly $40k in 2003. Meanwhile, the income remained relatively stable for Amandine
Bakery
.
However
, in 2006; the trends took a dramatic turn, and the sales
for Mari
Bakeshop
plummeted rapidly, they
dropped below $60k, and for Correct pronoun usage
apply
Amandine
Bakery
, the figure increased exponentially, reaching its peak at nearly $100k which is the highest in comparison to all. Similarly
, the sales
of Bolo
Cakery
also
increased, and it overtook the Mari
Bakeshop
with the double amount of sales
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