The graph compares employement rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010.

The graph compares employement rates in three sectors of the economy, in the UK, 2000-2010.
The diagram illustrates
employment
rates across three economic sectors in the United Kingdom from 2000 to 2010.
Overall
,
while
the private
sector
experienced a significant decline over the decade, both the public
sector
and the self-employed
sector
saw a modest increase in
employment
rates. In 2000, the public
sector
began with an
employment
rate of approximately 40%. It remained stable for the first three years before experiencing a gradual rise between 2002 and 2005.
Following
this
period, the rate experienced a slight dip but
then
resumed an upward trajectory, peaking just above 50% by 2010.
Similarly
, the self-employed
sector
started at just under 20% in 2000, maintained
this
level until 2005, and
then
underwent a steady increase, reaching 30% by the end of the period, its highest level in the decade.
In contrast
, the private
sector
began with an
employment
rate of around 50% in 2000. It saw a slight decline to 40% by 2002. After a brief period of stability between 2002 and 2003, the
sector
faced a sharp decrease, ending at 20% in 2010.
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