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The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below give information about the university sport court in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given diagram illustrates the
advancments
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advances
 made to the
univeristy
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university
sport
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sports
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court
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 between 1990 and the
current
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present
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 day.
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, the prominent changes include the establishment of a new basketball
court
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,
extension
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an extension
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 to the tennis
court
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,
as well as
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 shifts in the locations of some facilities. To commence, the outdoor pool has been converted into an
indoors
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indoor
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 swimming pool.
While
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 the cafe and the reception remain in the same position, the changing room has been extended to approximately double the side. A fitness centre is newly established in the tennis
court
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's preceding location, right beside the changing rooms. Another
noteable
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notable
noticeable
 change is replacing the park with a brand-new basketball
court
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. The tennis
court
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have
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has
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 been extended to double the
sizw
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size
, and
are
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is
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 now located directly adjacent to the basketball
court
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.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words court with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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