The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.

The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010.
The chart illustrates the expenses on consumer goods in the
UK
and
France
in the year 2010. Units are measured in
pounds
sterling.
Overall
, it is
appearent
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apparent
that both countries spent the most on cars, followed by books for the
UK
and computers for
France
.
Also
, both spent the least on perfume. Regarding the highest purchases, cars were the most bought consumer goods
by
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450,000
pounds
for Britain and
by
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400,000
pounds
for
France
.
Next,
the
UK
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UK's
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second highest was on books
by
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around 400,000
pounds
.
France
spent more than the
UK
on computers, which were the next high expenditure, by just under 400,000
pounds
. Turning to the least spent on goods by both countries, which
were
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perfume by 200,000
pounds
for
France
and just under 150,000
pounds
for the
UK
. The most large difference
on
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expenditure is on cameras, which Britain spent much more than
France
by around 200,000
pounds
.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words uk, france, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "just under" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • expenditure
  • consumer goods
  • chart
  • countries
  • overall
  • compare
  • analyze
  • categories
  • consumer spending
  • trends
  • proportions
  • statistics
  • increase
  • decrease
  • significant
  • notable
  • remarkable
  • substantial
  • considerable
  • determine
  • conclude
  • in conclusion
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