The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map below shows the development of the town of Stromer between 1995 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates the changes in the town called Stromer between 1995 and the present time. In 1995, it can be
seen
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lots of green areas and there was one big farmland on the south side of the city. Only 2 blocks of houses were placed in 1995.
Additionally
, there was only one shop in the centre of the town. The figure shows just one main road through Stromer in that year.
On the other hand
,
it is clear that
there is a lot of development in the city
according to
the map. The farmland in the south is smaller in the present day.
Likewise
, the forests have been smaller since 1995. It can be said that the population is higher because of the new blocks of apartments that were built.
Moreover
, there are more shops and there is a school in the centre of the town. On the
north-east
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side, an airport is shown on the map these days.
Furthermore
, the road has lots of branches which reach all the structures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • development
  • residential buildings
  • green spaces
  • commercial areas
  • shopping mall
  • parking facilities
  • river
  • marina
  • tourism
  • leisure activities
  • transportation infrastructure
  • roads
  • roundabout
  • access
  • industrial area
  • community center
  • town square
  • residents
  • social interaction
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