The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

IELTS Writing Task Chart for The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.

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The maps illustrate the current arrangement of a public library, and how it was 20 years ago.

Overall

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, the library now has more free spaces and

well-organised

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with some additional features like the Cafe and lecture

room

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First,

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they made the entrance more welcoming by placing a cafe and computer

room

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in the front rather than an enquiry desk and reading, and they removed the Tables and the chairs that were in the middle.

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this

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change will prepare you for what is next rather than starting with seeing a large amount of books.

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, they have added a lecture

room

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in place of the

children

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room

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, but they did not remove the

children

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room

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instead

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, they made it in the upper left corner.

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, they have supplemented the

children

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room

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with storytelling events so the

children

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can enjoy their learning process

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and just read the

children

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's fiction books by themselves.

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, they have placed two sofas in that area if anyone wants to rest.

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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words room, children with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.

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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

3 paragraphs

168 words

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conversion
reflecting
digital literacy
accessible
shift towards
community-focused
relocated
decreased demand
inviting
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