The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparison where relevant.
The maps illustrate the current arrangement of a public library, and how it was 20 years ago.
Overall
, the library now has more free spaces and well-organised
with some additional features like the Cafe and lecture Add a missing verb
is well-organised
room
.
First,
they made the entrance more welcoming by placing a cafe and computer room
in the front rather than an enquiry desk and reading, and they removed the Tables and the chairs that were in the middle. As a result
, this
change will prepare you for what is next rather than starting with seeing a large amount of books.
Secondly
, they have added a lecture room
in place of the children
's room
, but they did not remove the children
's room
instead
, they made it in the upper left corner. In addition
, they have supplemented the children
's room
with storytelling events so the children
can enjoy their learning process,
and just read the Remove the comma
apply
children
's fiction books by themselves. Also
, they have placed two sofas in that area if anyone wants to rest.Submitted by okalqusay on
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