Many people believe that the consumption of fast food is a major contributor to health problems in society. Others argue that it is simply a matter of personal choice and responsibility. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In

this

modern world, fast

foods

are becoming more and more common in numerous societies.

While

some have an opinion that eating junk

foods

is a

principle

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reason for health issues in communities,

other

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others

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have an opposing point of view which fast

food

consumers are only choosing what to eat and the decision is personal. I agree with the first group and both viewpoints will be argued in the following paragraphs. As it is mentioned above, a group of

people

claim that using fast

food

and

process

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foods

is

ones’

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own selection and it has no influence on

others

. They believe those who choose these kinds of meals are informed about the consequences that they will face and the challenges like diabetes are accepted, but they never encourage

others

to follow their diet;

people

are free to choose their decent meals;

For instance

, an employee who

have

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a

full time

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job demands to order

foods

like pizza or burgers for lunch because of the lack of time and his lifestyle; the mentioned person will never motivate other coworkers to follow his appetite.

Others

and I,

in contrast

, opine that eating

habitude

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is

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are

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a culture and

it

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will affect all the

people

in a country. Consuming snacks from restaurants or ready meals from

food

factories will support their business and they will obtain significant budgets for advertising; these commercials drive society to eat their products more. In

this

way,

people

’s healthy appetite will be destroyed and they will suffer from obesity so the needed nutrition will never be achieved for their body. The average of fast

food

products have to be controlled by the authorities of

food

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industry and all the

people

should take care of what nutrients they are using. In brief, there are two viewpoints: from one perspective, eating junk

foods

have

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detrimental effects on

society

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health; from

another

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it is just a personal choice and bears no effect on

others

. I fiercely agree with the first group and in my opinion, fast

food

is not only harmful

for

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its consumers

,

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but

also

has detrimental

result

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results

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for communities.