The bar chart below shows the numbers of men and women attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009. The pie chart gives information about the ages of these course participants.

The bar

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illustrates the

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of males and females attending various evening courses at an adult education centre in the year 2009,

whereas

the pie

chart

provides information about the ages of these course participants.

Overall

, it is clear from the bar

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that in all sections except sculpture women had the highest number of people,

while

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approximately half of

participants

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the participants

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were older than fifty years old. It is obvious from the bar

chart

that in

sculpture

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the sculpture

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section both males and females were no more than 10 individuals.

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,

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sphere had the highest quantity of females

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were 40,

while

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the painting

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sphere had the biggest number of males which was 30. It is worth noticing that just a tiny portion of participants were under 20 years old. Meanwhile,

one third

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of them were from 40 to 49 years old and whole 42% of them were fifty or even older.