The pie chart and table illustrate causes of worldwide land degradation and in which regions it has happened
The
pie
chart
and table illustrate causes
of worldwide land degradation and in which regions it has happened.
Correct article usage
the causes
Overall
, what stands out from the pie
chart
is that over-grazing and deforestation
saw the biggest points, which accounted for about two-thirds of the pie
chart
. What stands out from the table is that Europe
saw the highest results in all categories, except for overgrazing.
Looking at the pie
chart
, over-grazing has
35%, making it the number-one category on the list. Over-cultivation and Verb problem
is
deforestation
was
at 28% and 30%, respectively, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
while
others contained only 7%.
Regarding to
the table, Remove the preposition
apply
deforestation
in Europe
was five times as high as Oceania
, at 9.8 and 1.7, Change preposition
in Oceania
accordingly
. However
, in overcultivation
, Correct your spelling
over-cultivation
over cultivation
Oceania
saw 0%, whereas
Europe
saw the highest result at 7.7%. In overgrazing, Oceania
(11.3%) was two times as high as Europe
(5.5%). Nevertheless
, in total land degraded, Europe
(23%) was much more popular than Oceania
(13%). What is more, North America saw the lowest point in all categories: deforestation
(0.2%), over-cultivation (3.3%), overgrazing (1.5%), total
land degraded (5%).Correct word choice
and total
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